tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post4987325366949965576..comments2023-05-02T05:40:29.838-07:00Comments on AscendingTheHills: Between Heartbeats: A PoemJessica Mhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02450820269367184046noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-50648229131431159732012-02-02T17:07:54.476-08:002012-02-02T17:07:54.476-08:00Jessica, you need to submit this to "Time of ...Jessica, you need to submit this to "Time of Singing Magazine." Just Google them. I'm sure Lori Zill, the editor, will want to use it. It is right down the line of the mags. writings. I think your poem is great just the way it is. I wouldn't change a thing.Jim Snyderhttp://jim-snyder-publishing.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-49303091080128848922012-01-15T19:32:45.640-08:002012-01-15T19:32:45.640-08:00Ah, beautifully said!Ah, beautifully said!Debrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02273349436461781371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-1220395342263576652012-01-15T11:32:01.692-08:002012-01-15T11:32:01.692-08:00I like the rhyming in this lovely poem.I like the rhyming in this lovely poem.madeline40https://www.blogger.com/profile/06549058012582815995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-68707182967133945442012-01-15T10:43:02.795-08:002012-01-15T10:43:02.795-08:00I like the way you express reality through emotion...I like the way you express reality through emotions inspired through nature.Maria Grujicic (Malena)http://www.poemsthatdance.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-22862685724412073262011-11-29T16:52:04.065-08:002011-11-29T16:52:04.065-08:00It's a beautiful poem, Jessica. Some unexpecte...It's a beautiful poem, Jessica. Some unexpected rhymes (blessed, manifest), a good thing. It seems to flow from a state of grace. Lovely!Adrienehttp://sweepyjean.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-83602129407933691032011-11-24T14:36:54.045-08:002011-11-24T14:36:54.045-08:00*heartbeat*heartbeatMelissa Tandochttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13747825707650125721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-2909407460547608622011-11-24T14:36:17.067-08:002011-11-24T14:36:17.067-08:00This is an oratio Jessica... and when you totally ...This is an oratio Jessica... and when you totally pour out your heart more than your mind, you express yourself well :D <br /><br />Oh, I admire you for your soul's sensitivity. When you hear God's hearbeat...that'll be the best prayer...Melissa Tandochttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13747825707650125721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-45251460507788053952011-11-17T10:43:56.431-08:002011-11-17T10:43:56.431-08:00you are a brave and creative woman, jessica! i ad...you are a brave and creative woman, jessica! i admire your for putting your ideas out into the world in such a thoughtful yet unpretentious manner. love it! <br /><br />especially love the idea of God 'between heartbeats' referring to this present moment. i wouldn't have 'got' that if you hadn't explained, so i appreciate the narrative that went with the poem. xoxo <br /><br />ps those woods look like a perfect place for fairies to hide ...Dangerous Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12442306921276302945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-89523279058819257782011-11-17T03:27:15.748-08:002011-11-17T03:27:15.748-08:00Jess, there can be no better title than "betw...Jess, there can be no better title than "between heartbeats." The whole thought of something that exists between heartbeats is so splendid. You know, when the heart is full, verses flow and those verses are the best. As everyone had mentioned, don't change a thing.<br /><br />Joy always,<br />SusanS. Susan Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08885957854901839400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-79077664258570075232011-11-17T00:02:06.559-08:002011-11-17T00:02:06.559-08:00I see a budding poet emerging....I see a budding poet emerging....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-63053869023004676672011-11-16T16:42:07.751-08:002011-11-16T16:42:07.751-08:00Just lovely!<3Just lovely!<3photos by janhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04931922143998773384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-53425657118591399552011-11-16T16:41:12.149-08:002011-11-16T16:41:12.149-08:00I don't believe I would change a thing Jessica...I don't believe I would change a thing Jessica. It's perfect just the way it is :)Mary Hudak-Collins livingthescripture.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18181851742870395058noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-13027673756047160762011-11-16T13:17:06.716-08:002011-11-16T13:17:06.716-08:00Jessica, this is beautiful! Such imagery! And, I ...Jessica, this is beautiful! Such imagery! And, I love the title - it is perfect for this.<br /><br />The only thing I would suggest is looking at the first verse - it doesn't follow the same rhyme scheme as the ones coming after it.<br /><br />Blessings!Martha Jane Orlandohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11620499267401065780noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-54635126528015654962011-11-16T12:28:18.061-08:002011-11-16T12:28:18.061-08:00Hello.
Seems we are all in unison. I don't thi...Hello.<br />Seems we are all in unison. I don't think you should change anything either. It's written beautifully & truly encompasses Jehovah God as being ubiquitous.<br /><br />Poetry is not meant to be analysed, but should evoke emotions in the heart. You have done that with this one!<br /><br />Thanks so much for sharing.<br /><br /><a href="http://mypoetcharm.blogspot.com/2011/11/cry-not-for-me.html" rel="nofollow">Cry Not For Me</a>The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-63256840442926297382011-11-16T11:52:52.710-08:002011-11-16T11:52:52.710-08:00I agree with Ron...please don`t change anything! I...I agree with Ron...please don`t change anything! I especially like the part about: "You are the rising sun in man's heart, burning bright." Beautiful!!!!Nelietahttp://nelietatravellingadventures.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-24308661284963145052011-11-16T10:30:08.095-08:002011-11-16T10:30:08.095-08:00I loved it...especially the last verse. That spea...I loved it...especially the last verse. That speaks to me of the mystical union with our Abba Father. It defies logic and reason, yet is the most precious gift of love, peace and joy, amidst the trials of life.<br /><br />Thank you for sharing JessicaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-3109895088525640562011-11-16T09:48:24.492-08:002011-11-16T09:48:24.492-08:00Jessica,I truly love it...amazing!!Jessica,I truly love it...amazing!!Alpana Jaiswalhttp://www.motifsonthewall.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-39386356705038428222011-11-16T08:28:14.885-08:002011-11-16T08:28:14.885-08:00No editing necessary! It was pure, meaningful and ...No editing necessary! It was pure, meaningful and poetic. A true gift to the giver of all gifts! <br /><br />http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2011/11/lyric-fire-a-poets-sigh.htmlTamekahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09022350498501742442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-69584388200730344832011-11-16T08:09:37.148-08:002011-11-16T08:09:37.148-08:00Agree with Roy. It is perfect Jessica.
http://rim...Agree with Roy. It is perfect Jessica.<br /><br />http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/02/journey-from-ashes.htmlRimlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04800381730067608251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-22126736727625557202011-11-16T07:49:42.786-08:002011-11-16T07:49:42.786-08:00Feel free to Roy :) Glad you enjoyed it! ~God Bles...Feel free to Roy :) Glad you enjoyed it! ~God BlessJessica Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02450820269367184046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-43905164366395807472011-11-16T07:44:06.567-08:002011-11-16T07:44:06.567-08:00don't change a thing it is perfect god bless y...don't change a thing it is perfect god bless you. may i copy it? please god bless <3Roy Durhamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14834208730553747847noreply@blogger.com