tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post6299859491538798760..comments2023-05-02T05:40:29.838-07:00Comments on AscendingTheHills: OM (Final poem for NaPoWriMo)Jessica Mhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02450820269367184046noreply@blogger.comBlogger44125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-55371015212349135242014-03-19T03:48:05.140-07:002014-03-19T03:48:05.140-07:00beautiful!beautiful!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13178682607450781388noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-4472263499888164762012-04-30T23:27:07.344-07:002012-04-30T23:27:07.344-07:00Rhyming frightens me, I am full of admiration for ...Rhyming frightens me, I am full of admiration for people brave enough to rhyme.Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09676086816415791957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-74982233223413036292012-04-30T10:49:30.952-07:002012-04-30T10:49:30.952-07:00:):)Chrishttp://chrisgalvinwriter.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-14941092149519793822012-04-30T09:10:14.516-07:002012-04-30T09:10:14.516-07:00This is beautiful indeed. The universal sound, th...This is beautiful indeed. The universal sound, the music of the spheres. I have enjoyed this poetry challenge on several blogs. As someone who is not a poet (!) it is especially fun for me to enjoy words used in such a different way.Galen Pearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10189831838630645863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-59584951108704727692012-04-29T22:09:45.243-07:002012-04-29T22:09:45.243-07:00I love OM, it's my Dad's name :)Your poem ...I love OM, it's my Dad's name :)Your poem is so beautiful and pure like OM. Loved the verses and especially the last two lines.<br /><br />http://sulekharawat.com/2012/04/29/you-know/sulekkhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06022718430683943561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-8607992895820153312012-04-29T08:09:35.580-07:002012-04-29T08:09:35.580-07:00How utterly beautiful...I love the image of "...How utterly beautiful...I love the image of "anger's ships," it give the impression that anger is always shoring up against us, trying to get in. This whole poem touched my soul -- you are truly a gifted poet, Jessica.jimi annhttp://wakingupintheafternoon.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-42247188499312783782012-04-29T06:35:13.520-07:002012-04-29T06:35:13.520-07:00Of the poems you wrote, I guess I like this the be...Of the poems you wrote, I guess I like this the best. I have enjoyed your poetry and have read your status updates afterwards... first things first and I'm so proud that you have participated in this blog.<br /><br />You have written this with such depth. I could feel the ache and different emotions you felt here. It's so human, so vulnerable and so sincere. Every poetry you composed is a prayer, a psalm, a mantra, a chant, music to me. It fills my soul with wonder.<br /><br />Your works are precious Jessica just as you are.<br /><br />And this challenge brings you to a greater revelation of yourself before God.Melissa Tandochttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13747825707650125721noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-73407134093068665902012-04-28T18:20:52.209-07:002012-04-28T18:20:52.209-07:00Lovely. Keep writing. :0)Lovely. Keep writing. :0)Lexhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624088163318252014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-72291195588343709452012-04-28T12:39:07.355-07:002012-04-28T12:39:07.355-07:00Savira...Thank you... ♥
~ namasteSavira...Thank you... ♥<br />~ namasteJessicahttp://www.ascendingthehills.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-60814732697069181912012-04-28T12:36:19.092-07:002012-04-28T12:36:19.092-07:00Thanks for stopping by Rachel!Thanks for stopping by Rachel!Jessicahttp://www.ascendingthehills.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-35707945998210831112012-04-28T12:35:29.428-07:002012-04-28T12:35:29.428-07:00Thank you Tameka so much for your kind words. I...Thank you Tameka so much for your kind words. I've really enjoyed reading your poetry this month...though I've been reading it before this month and have always loved it! <br />~ BlessingsJessicahttp://www.ascendingthehills.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-51124939874701007232012-04-28T01:44:39.447-07:002012-04-28T01:44:39.447-07:00The essence of your words vibrate deep within.... ...The essence of your words vibrate deep within.... OM is universal and you have done this beautifully.... Thank youSavira Guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17463773284421101573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-50489699447635061922012-04-27T18:27:16.132-07:002012-04-27T18:27:16.132-07:00I love your intro too! Poetry really does help peo...I love your intro too! Poetry really does help people express things and understand things. <br /><br />Love this poem!! :-)Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-52607764257310938762012-04-27T17:52:35.585-07:002012-04-27T17:52:35.585-07:00I love your honesty in your intro. Poetry will alw...I love your honesty in your intro. Poetry will always be relevant and those who seek it shall always find it. You did that beautifully this month. This poem is indicative of why you should continue on your poetic quest. Lovely lines. It was a joy reading you this April!Tamekahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09022350498501742442noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-9662957145394838102012-04-27T13:10:38.348-07:002012-04-27T13:10:38.348-07:00Thank you so much Steve...I'm so glad you enjo...Thank you so much Steve...I'm so glad you enjoyed it! ~ namasteJessicahttp://www.ascendingthehills.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-6330687459818797902012-04-27T09:05:02.009-07:002012-04-27T09:05:02.009-07:00"I know then that I was never truly broken
Fo..."I know then that I was never truly broken<br />For I am one with the first syllable ever spoken.<br />~Om~"<br /><br />That sent chills of awe up my spine and filled me with joy! Wonderful poem, Jessica!Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02549770321948541384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-33768874152570427882012-04-27T08:59:46.546-07:002012-04-27T08:59:46.546-07:00"But, poetry is like an incurable infection.&..."But, poetry is like an incurable infection." So true...Thank you so much for sharing. :)Jessicahttp://www.ascendingthehills.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-53531917928923284732012-04-27T08:58:42.960-07:002012-04-27T08:58:42.960-07:00Thank you so much Autumn...and praise be to the so...Thank you so much Autumn...and praise be to the source of all Being, Who inspires who causes love to blossom.<br />~ blessingsJessicahttp://www.ascendingthehills.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-87307965786440778942012-04-27T08:56:57.361-07:002012-04-27T08:56:57.361-07:00That was beautiful Chris...Thank you so much for s...That was beautiful Chris...Thank you so much for sharing your reflections. I am glad you enjoyed it! ~ many blessingsJessicahttp://www.ascendingthehills.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-63545686839750382122012-04-27T07:32:41.008-07:002012-04-27T07:32:41.008-07:00Jessica, what a lovely poem. I often feel like yo...Jessica, what a lovely poem. I often feel like you did, that there's no use in writing poetry and I'm just not good at it. But, poetry is like an incurable infection. It keeps growing inside and we must pay attention to it. <br /><br />Thanks so much for visiting my blog.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-19935727660723373772012-04-27T06:41:35.041-07:002012-04-27T06:41:35.041-07:00Such a wonderful poem! No,no, its a great prayer a...Such a wonderful poem! No,no, its a great prayer and while reading it I involuntarily folded my hands and bowed my head in reverence to that omnipotent One who supplied these powerful words to you! I bow in reverence to your poetic prowess too!<br />-ELLEAutumn Elizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01014405688420323560noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-6777520042792772512012-04-27T06:32:48.534-07:002012-04-27T06:32:48.534-07:00Your final poem is like the grand finale at a fire...Your final poem is like the grand finale at a fireworks show. Then, in the final lines, you have found the silence at the core. I'm left in the moment after the last firework has blossomed, the last sparks have fallen, and there is wonder in the silence. Hope you'll keep writing poetry.Chrishttp://chrisgalvinwriter.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-12516079965603074942012-04-27T06:08:18.137-07:002012-04-27T06:08:18.137-07:00Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging wo...Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words. And your reflections are spot on! Amen! :) <br />~blessingsJessicahttp://www.ascendingthehills.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-41688813829822305662012-04-27T06:06:59.721-07:002012-04-27T06:06:59.721-07:00Thank you so much Andy! I am so glad you enjoyed i...Thank you so much Andy! I am so glad you enjoyed it!<br />~blessingsJessicahttp://www.ascendingthehills.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2583035984896584839.post-87687842363340107522012-04-27T06:06:25.535-07:002012-04-27T06:06:25.535-07:00What a way to end your NaPoWriMo journey! This is ...What a way to end your NaPoWriMo journey! This is one of those poems that is accessible to us all. We've all felt the heartbreak that had us "Left naked and bare at center's core" and only then to we realize that at our core is God and even when we are broken, he is still there as strong as ever. That's when we know we can build again. Thank you for sharing such a deeply expressive poem! Keep writing! It's one of the most precious gifts you can give yourself!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com